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Chapter 1: Sergeant Drew Futton and Cobra

The year 3010, the earth defense forces or EDF are in a war with two alien races. The first race is called Diloks from the planet Kelwan, Kelwan was located behind Pluto, they are an alien bug race, and their soldiers are genetically enhanced with Milotyc DNA. Milotyc is the second race they also lived on Kelwan; green skin aliens half with human DNA. The Diloks and Milotyc are enemies against the EDF. There are 2000 Fortresses around the earth all under the command of the EDF. In the U.S. there is the one of the eight main Fortresses, the eagle nest the code name for the base the other 7 are located in Asia, Africa, Canada, Antarctica, South America, Europe, and the Moon. Commander of the EDF is 4 star General Alvin Duke, Alvin is about 55 years of age he is at least 6 foot and bald no beard of course. He sat at his desk by the window over looking the infantry barracks.

A knock came at the door, “Come.” Alvin said. The door open and a 7 foot man enter the room; he unlike the General had a goatee, barrel chest chubby cheek, and had blue eyes the General believe he must be at least 24 years of age. The man saluted and then he sat down on the chair in front of the desk. “So you are the legendary Cobra I’ve been hearing of.” The General said. “I am sir but call me Drew or Sergeant Futton.” Replied Drew Futton. “Non sense you are a sergeant of the Hawk platoon. Code name Cobra, specialist in close combat, sniper, and explosives you are the total package.” Alvin said. The Hawk platoon was a specialist platoon, confidential missions are given to the members of the platoon, Assassination missions are the popular missions given to the soldiers, and these soldiers are protected by the EDF laws of specialist soldiers which state that any member of the Hawk platoon or any specialist platoon cannot be tried for murder. “Thank you sir, what did you need me for?” Drew asked. “A mission Cobra, you are to take the next Wretch to Kelwan then establish the first outpost also you and 100 other soldiers will build it, once it is build, 5000 more soldiers will be station their then you will be the commander of that outpost and I will be sending Hawk mission to you through this data pad.” The general said and handed over a flat screen to Drew. Drew pressed a button and the pad glowed blue then a bunch of word popped up, Log, mission, and scan were the words on the pad. “What is this?” Drew asked. “This is your data pad, it is voice activated it only turns on to your voice, the log command is where you can speak of your day to day ordeals, the mission command is where the missions I send you will be located by saying “Mission” you can see all the missions you need to do and the ones that are completed, the scan command is a scanner for Diloks and Milotyc if the dot is blue it is a Diloks and if its green it’s a Milotyc.” General Duke explained. “I understand.” Drew said then he stood up and saluted then he exited the room. “What isss thisss shit we don’t do these kinds of missions.” Said another voice, the voice was a hissing sound to Drew. Drew saw no one then he knew who it was. “Cobra, I know we don’t do these missions but it is my mission I’m going to do it to the fullest and plus General Alvin was praising you.” Drew said to himself. Drew has multiple personalities he has himself the good soldier, and then there is Cobra the rough and tough soldier, assassin whatever you like to call him, together is what makes Drew good at what he does and that is kill anything, no mercy, and no shit from anyone. But he also feels like any ordinary 24 year old, lust and partying but he also is serious and does the job to the fullest. “Usss you mean Drew.” Cobra said, Drew and Cobra nodded

Drew walked down the hall to the DCR or the defense control room, he enter the key code 73821 and placed his hand on the screen below the key panel, “Welcome SGT. Futton” a voice said, and then the door swung open there sat a man with thick glasses and a hat turned backwards typing too fast than Drew could dream of. “Well Cobra or Drew why are you gracing me with your presence?” the man asked. “Come on Tech you know you’re my favorite cousin.” Drew replied. “Your only cousin.” Tech corrected. “I need a favor.” Drew said to Tech, “I’m listing.” Tech said. “I need you to come with me to Kelwan and build a defense system for the outpost I need build, and you will be my executive officer as well.” Drew said. “Are you out of your mind, you want me to go with you to the enemies’ home and build a defense system on a planet I don’t even know.” Tech replied. “It has a lot of mountains and tunnel and it is all dirt, there you go now you know, so can we go now.” Drew said with a smile and grabbed his cousin’s laptop and walked out the door. “How do I get the equipment I need to Kelwan, huh smart ass.” Tech said as he grabbed his leather long coat and slung it over his shoulder. Drew handed over the lap top and said “Don’t worry about it; I will get what you need when we get there.” “When do we leave?” Tech asked. “Now.” Drew said as he open the door that leads to out side and there was a Wretch waiting for them. A Wretch is a fighter aircraft that can hold its own in air fights and it is capable of transporting supplies and soldiers. The side door open and Drew and Tech enter the Wretch. The door closed behind them, the pilot turned and said “These are for you Captain and Lieutenant.” the pilot handed over two packages one to Drew and one to Tech. They both open them and two metal objects were in it. Drew’s metal objects were two vertical bars connected by a short horizontal bar. It was the rank of a Captain; Tech’s object was one vertical bar, which was the rank of lieutenant. There was a beeping noise in the Wretch and then Drew’s data pad lit up and blinked on and off, Drew lift it up and it said General Duke on it. “Say answer.” Tech instructed his cousin. “Answer.” Drew said and then the blinking stop and it was a solid black, then a blue light appeared in one line then the light spread out and rotated in circles other lines started to form then a figure stood on the pad, it was General Duke. “How did you get that small?” Drew asked, the pilot and Tech exploded into laughter Drew took off his boot and threw it at Tech, the boot hit him in the family jewels and Tech went down, Drew exploded in laughter in Tech’s face, the pilot shut up. “It’s… a hologram.” Tech said between breathes. “That make sense, so general what is this about.” Drew said at the hologram.

“I take it that the pilot gave you the new rank, the pilot’s name is unimportant in case if you were going to ask.” General Alvin said. Drew nodded then he asked “Is that all you want say or is there a catch?” Alvin chuckle and said “Well I guess I shouldn’t beat around the bush with you! There is Drew; I need you as soon as you build the outpost to come back to earth.” “For what sir?” Drew asked, then Cobra took over then snap back “Hopefully to kill someone thisss shit isss boring, these missionsss are for the engineer core not a Hawk member.” “You wanna say that again Drew and why are you hissing.” Alvin said with a glare. “Sir, Cobra is my other personality I am sorry for the outburst.” Drew said. Alvin looked puzzle the he looked at Tech and said “Is this true?” “Afraid so sir, but Cobra is a nice guy, I mean Drew or whoever the ***** it is.” Tech replied. “Ok then the mission after you complete the construction on Kelwan is too lead a group of Hawk members to the CDF territories in Asia.” The CDF is a acronym for the Confederate Defense Force, certain officers and soldiers of the EDF didn’t believe in certain enemy capture protocol or enemy contact protocol as well. The capture protocol says no enemy can be torture during integration or in custody on earth or any other planet, and the enemy contact protocol is that the EDF cannot attack the enemy home, fort, base or any other housing of enemies and the enemy must attack first before the EDF can response back to the attack.

“Ok see you then, Captain Futton out.” Drew said and the data pad cut off the hologram evaporated into blue dust particles and the pilot started the wretch, they were off to the planet where the Diloks and Milotycs dwell, they were off to hell.